ZapFic 50 Friday: The Escape
Kim Hua walked away from the window, her tears flowing freely. The pain in her heart was so strong she scarcely breathe. It felt hopeless but she must escape from her abusive husband. She left carrying her baby in her arms. She looked up at the bright sun and smiled.
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A brave woman, she did the right thing for herself and especially her child. You've put a lot of emotion in a mere 50 words, great job.
Thank you very much for your comments. This is actually the first time I am taking part in the contest.
They're fun to keep the brain active while trying to fit a story within the limited space. Good luck.
Yes, it is a good challenge. I am looking forward to the next contest.
Well done -- a powerful first entry to this contest!
Thank you so much. I am very much encouraged by your comments. Have a great Sunday.
Beautiful post! Your words move and inspire.
Wow..short but meaningful. I can relate to your stories. Lesson learn. 😊
Thank you so much @mell79.
It is an interesting challenge to tell a story in 50 words.